WizardlyWalrusKing's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[i want you]

Lines look pretty shakey, in my opinion. It probably would have been so much better with curves, as women are inherently curvy. You should really working on trying to do a lot of your lines in one quick swipe. I also feel like her right hand looks a bit masculine, it needs to be a bit smaller.

[Ichigo]

It's not bad.
You should probably do more details with the feet, but it's fine. I'm not a huge fan of the shiny white bits. Kinda makes her look like a balloon. Also eyes are about an eye apart from each other, her eyes are a bit further and they are foreshortened as well, making it look weird. Id say the hair also looks like bubblegum.

KatieSapphire responds:

it's an old art actually i drew this last year and it was one of my first manga girls actually...

[Sooz's Backside]

Those feet and hands need some work, they look pretty weird. Also her right buttcheek is out a bit too much.

[Beat It Boy, You Bother Me]

Simple yet effective!

[Umi - Jacket meme]

Pretty damn good.
However there are a few apparent issues I noticed pretty quickly.
Her foot has some weird looking curve near the top (right foot) looks a bit off.
Her rib cage could probably also be protruding out a bit more on her left side.
Her arm is also doing some weird curve (right arm) as well.

[Bowsette!]

Great choice of colors, I love the hotness of the bottom portion of the piece. Everything about this is excellent.

[mouth of sky]

All the proportions and anatomy in general in this piece seem really off.

[Janet!]

The hips seem a little flat.

alejandroartworks responds:

Thanks for the observation dude!

[Peppermint's sass]

Issues I am seeing are her groin should probably be more inward. Her left hand and arm have very little details compared the other one and it does appear smaller as well. Her right eye is bigger than her left. And finally the torso where the ribcage meets the tummy seems very small.

Magra responds:

I see, I may have to redraw this one to fix the issues.

["Oops!"]

Very nice work with it. Theres really nothing going wrong with this piece.

Zaccura responds:

Oh hey, thanks a bunch! :D