WizardlyWalrusKing's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Gold Demon]

Love it, can't see any flaws with it, good choice of colors, shading, the anatomy, the pose. It's all really good.

Minimancom responds:

hey thanks man, i really appreciate it!

[Commission: Princess Isabella]

I like it especially the choice of colors and how you used a gradiant for the dress, it looks very pretty. I feel like you should have spread it out more in the hair, just kinda looks messy with just the stars in the middle of it.

[paint practice!]

This is an incredible piece, the shading, the line-work, the anatomy. All of it fits together exceedingly well. My only issue is mainly the length of her neck, maybe its a bit too long? But in reality this is already a 5/5 in my book.

[Cinna]

I like this piece the shading is nice, the proportions are also fitting for her cartoony physique. My only issue I'm seeing is your line work, it looks incredibly shaky. You should try to do your lines in quick strokes, a lot of this looks like a bunch of chicken scratches throughout the piece, with some places smoother than others.

[Wimp Witch - Chapter 4-21]

I love the fluidity of all the characters in this. You can really feel what is going on through their body expressions.

[Dyed Blue]

The anatomy in this piece is excellent, the shading also adds a really nice touch. I'm also diggin the blur effect near the bottom.
Noice

carmine3 responds:

I struggled a lot to make it as noice. uwu thanks^^

[Give a another opportunity please]

Yeah i don't even know how you get onto the art portal, but I do love critquing pieces and not holding back.

Now the anatomy on this piece is fine, minus the hands. Her right hand looks pretty messed up. Also is that thing in the sky supposed to be the moon? It looks more like a glowy blob. I think the shading on her thighs needs to shift a bit to the left to correctly reflect the moon in the sky. In my opinion you should have also added a bit more of a background, I mean you could have at least added stars with a flat horizon.

werewolfnoima responds:

well thanks but the reason is i been scouted before got taken away so i made even worse and wait for somebody come to scout me or until other user i used be taken away but ik have to wait for scout

[Sweater meme 2018 - Sarah X3]

Adorable piece.
The sweater just makes it so cute!

[Greetings Saint]

Wow that gave me a laugh.
I honestly didn't know what to expect after clicking on the thumb.
I was expecting some poorly drawn girl but I got something so... so much better.

Big-Bad-Bombus responds:

Happy to entertain. :)

[Amy Rose]

Something about her butt just seems.. off.