WizardlyWalrusKing's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Feelin' Good]

Out of your entire gallery this is your worst. Yet, it is still incredible. Nice work, I love this too!

JesterDK responds:

Intrigue! In some ways, I like this pic more than a lot of stuff I've drawn. And in other ways, less. It's definitely different. And I do feel like it's outside of a lot of peoples' interests in general, too, but it was just a random thing I wanted to make in a different way, so it's fine if it's not AwesomeFlavor. Hahaha

Just out of curiosity, though, do you think this is notably worse because of the style it's done in/it's overall look, or because it doesn't look like the chara maybe? Or something else?
It's fine if you don't have a ready answer or anything, too, if that's the case! I just think it can be interesting to hear what people do and don't prefer in stuff that gets posted sometimes, too.

[Nanobeer]

This is very good. Though the foreshortening does seem a bit off, I know exactly what is going on. Her left arm seems the most offputting to me

[Cheelai]

Everything about her looks great. though I feel like she seems a bit cross eyed. just a bit, nice work!

ICKOMAN responds:

Thanks, I kind it noticed too. It's good to know I'm not crazy.

[Cheelai]

What tablet do you use?
I'm struggling to find one that even works properly.

[Kureiji Tensai Cat Suit]

Okay, there are a lot of problems with this piece... Your facial structure needs work, you should be mapping that shit out, not guessing where everything goes. Watch this video, and study it well draw no less than 100 heads: https://youtu.be/FUJZUZRmNUE.

Your line work, upon inspection is very shaky and lacks confidence. Your conture, however, is actually pretty good and I especially like the bulge you gave in her titties due to her clothing, nice work in that regard. Anyways, when inking you should be doing so using your ENTIRE arm, and try to do big portions in a single stroke as quick as you can. Doing so slowly causes jitter and don't you dare chicken scratch the lines in using your wrist.

[Sketching]

Nicely done, her right arm (top portion) seems a bit small, though.

Imp-with-a-Pencil responds:

still got trouble with the proportions but im working on it. :)

[Bara Claus]

I love your stuff.
You draw dudes incredibly well.
My only real gripe is maybe his wrists, they seem really thin to me.
Not that I would know since I barely study dudes.

oblivionscribe responds:

Hey thanks, the wrist thing is more of a personal style, lol. Sometimes I draw the wrists more narrow and sometimes not - really just depends how I'm feeling when I'm doodling. :D

[the latest outfit meme]

Your stuff is front page material.
You would easily get scouted if you had one more piece.

[Symbo]

Proportions are really wonky. One thing I'll give you are those are some damn fine lines, really smooth. Though it may just be a stylistic choice / preference I am not a fan in the least of your gigantic noses. On top of that the realistic nose looks so jarring in relation to the exaggerated features and cartoon eyes. I feel your anatomy needs work, it's just too wonky. Theres exaggerating proportions and this is just all over the place. Especially down in her thighs, her left thigh is much better than her right, it seems.

Keep it up, my dude.

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