WizardlyWalrusKing's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cheelai]

Everything about her looks great. though I feel like she seems a bit cross eyed. just a bit, nice work!

ICKOMAN responds:

Thanks, I kind it noticed too. It's good to know I'm not crazy.

[Cheelai]

What tablet do you use?
I'm struggling to find one that even works properly.

[Kureiji Tensai Cat Suit]

Okay, there are a lot of problems with this piece... Your facial structure needs work, you should be mapping that shit out, not guessing where everything goes. Watch this video, and study it well draw no less than 100 heads: https://youtu.be/FUJZUZRmNUE.

Your line work, upon inspection is very shaky and lacks confidence. Your conture, however, is actually pretty good and I especially like the bulge you gave in her titties due to her clothing, nice work in that regard. Anyways, when inking you should be doing so using your ENTIRE arm, and try to do big portions in a single stroke as quick as you can. Doing so slowly causes jitter and don't you dare chicken scratch the lines in using your wrist.

[Bara Claus]

I love your stuff.
You draw dudes incredibly well.
My only real gripe is maybe his wrists, they seem really thin to me.
Not that I would know since I barely study dudes.

oblivionscribe responds:

Hey thanks, the wrist thing is more of a personal style, lol. Sometimes I draw the wrists more narrow and sometimes not - really just depends how I'm feeling when I'm doodling. :D

[the latest outfit meme]

Your stuff is front page material.
You would easily get scouted if you had one more piece.

[Symbo]

Proportions are really wonky. One thing I'll give you are those are some damn fine lines, really smooth. Though it may just be a stylistic choice / preference I am not a fan in the least of your gigantic noses. On top of that the realistic nose looks so jarring in relation to the exaggerated features and cartoon eyes. I feel your anatomy needs work, it's just too wonky. Theres exaggerating proportions and this is just all over the place. Especially down in her thighs, her left thigh is much better than her right, it seems.

Keep it up, my dude.

[Happy Birthday Meru!]

Hello bootyful

[Hilda [Pokemon] SFW Solo]

Just so you know.
your patreon link gives me a 404

AleskaArt responds:

Oh thank you so much man, that was because of the ")" in the end. I fixed it now. I wish it was possible to use HTML here

[Small Planetoid]

Not a huge fan of those sun lines and the way the moon's light is coming from seemingly nowhere is also kinda weird.
I do like the effect of this though.

FlumpyTripod responds:

Yeah, I was going for a crayon-drawn kinda vibe, but I don't think I quite went far enough with it.
In terms of the moon's light, I assume you mean there's no source for the light to reflect off of it? I don't know. I just put a moon there without thinking about that.

[Horny Clair]

Big boobs are always a big plus