WizardlyWalrusKing's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[SPIDER GIRL!]

Oh wow, this is a very interesting piece. So many freaking arms, so much is going on. Drawing spider girls could potentially be a great way to practice arms and hands xD. Thing that is breaking it for me are mainly her legs and downward. Her feet look pretty confusing and I doubt she could walk on them and also the fur length on her left leg makes it look bigger than the other.

Steinberg responds:

Oh the hands were a nightmare! But, they were good practrice indeed!
I had so much trouble with her feet and ohhh, I haven't noticed the thing about the fur, absolutely, one leg looks shorter than the other, thanks for letting me know, hehe.

[Neil the inkling boy]

Your form needs work on the main dude.
Are you trying to foreshorten his left arm? It looks more like he has a very short upper arm compared to his forearm. Hands need a bit of work too.

MrBeardred responds:

thanks ! i need work very hard in this part :D

[Gold Demon]

Love it, can't see any flaws with it, good choice of colors, shading, the anatomy, the pose. It's all really good.

Minimancom responds:

hey thanks man, i really appreciate it!

[Dyed Blue]

The anatomy in this piece is excellent, the shading also adds a really nice touch. I'm also diggin the blur effect near the bottom.
Noice

carmine3 responds:

I struggled a lot to make it as noice. uwu thanks^^

[Give a another opportunity please]

Yeah i don't even know how you get onto the art portal, but I do love critquing pieces and not holding back.

Now the anatomy on this piece is fine, minus the hands. Her right hand looks pretty messed up. Also is that thing in the sky supposed to be the moon? It looks more like a glowy blob. I think the shading on her thighs needs to shift a bit to the left to correctly reflect the moon in the sky. In my opinion you should have also added a bit more of a background, I mean you could have at least added stars with a flat horizon.

werewolfnoima responds:

well thanks but the reason is i been scouted before got taken away so i made even worse and wait for somebody come to scout me or until other user i used be taken away but ik have to wait for scout

[Greetings Saint]

Wow that gave me a laugh.
I honestly didn't know what to expect after clicking on the thumb.
I was expecting some poorly drawn girl but I got something so... so much better.

Big-Bad-Bombus responds:

Happy to entertain. :)

[Annoying Countess Zale]

I don't know if it just part of the theme with insect anthro.
But it just looks like she doesn't even have a ribcage.
Might have added a bit more to the piece if it looked like she did, others might agree.

OddyMcStrange responds:

Insects are invertebrates, they don't have bones. She isn't going to look like she has a ribcage because she doesn't have one. Her design is based more on bugs than generic furries.

[Mavis's hideout]

Kinda reminds me of shadman, honestly.
Id say maybe the hands are a bit too small.

Artrazor responds:

as more i look at it i suppose the hands couldve been bigger and it reminds you of shadman in what way ? should i be flattered or worried