WizardlyWalrusKing's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Peace]

The pose is pretty fluid but the rib-cage area and the tummy look really messed up.

PsychoSloth responds:

Thanks for the feedback. Yeah it could definitely use some work but I will just say it is an alien and it is suppose to look like that.

[Elf King]

Nice work, I like the effect of lighting and the gold reflecting onto his back.

kafusfv responds:

Thanks!

[Catty doodle]

The proportions seem a bit off. The head might be a little too big for this type of body. The legs seem a bit off too... but I just can't put my finger on it...

Magra responds:

well, I was half asleep while drawing it so, it may be all off, though it could be cause of the cartoony design with more realistic proportions, though your guess is as good as mine.

[[Wuayaba] With an Oni]

Not sure why this is so low, this is a pretty great piece.

RandomRuz responds:

Hey, thanks! It really means a lot your reaction c:

[Tecnology]

It's a very strange piece in my opinion. But the anatomy, perspective of the room and pose is pretty dang good. Not a huge fan of your shading style, feels a bit messy and fuzzy. But good job none-the-less! c:

Ragkul responds:

yes, understand the reference. maybe an artwork collab between a shadling artist and me results, hahaha. Or more eficient option: learn to shadow.

[Ichigo]

It's not bad.
You should probably do more details with the feet, but it's fine. I'm not a huge fan of the shiny white bits. Kinda makes her look like a balloon. Also eyes are about an eye apart from each other, her eyes are a bit further and they are foreshortened as well, making it look weird. Id say the hair also looks like bubblegum.

KatieSapphire responds:

it's an old art actually i drew this last year and it was one of my first manga girls actually...

[Janet!]

The hips seem a little flat.

alejandroartworks responds:

Thanks for the observation dude!

[Peppermint's sass]

Issues I am seeing are her groin should probably be more inward. Her left hand and arm have very little details compared the other one and it does appear smaller as well. Her right eye is bigger than her left. And finally the torso where the ribcage meets the tummy seems very small.

Magra responds:

I see, I may have to redraw this one to fix the issues.

["Oops!"]

Very nice work with it. Theres really nothing going wrong with this piece.

Zaccura responds:

Oh hey, thanks a bunch! :D

[Deer Satyr girl]

I like her, she looks really cute. You should probably save your files as PNG since it uses lossless compression apposed to jpeg.

Magra responds:

Huh, heard that before, I think I'll start doing that so it the compression no longer messes with the artwork.